Monday, December 5, 2011

High School is the Root of Killed Creativity


The general argument made by Dale J. Stephens in his work "The Case Against College," is that college is more of a burden in the long run, rather than a helpful necessity. More specifically, Stephens argues that students coming out of college are coming out with debt, less creativity and a desire to find a job quickly, not giving them the chance to explore in creative ways. He writes, "Instead of sitting in class, unschoolers create their education from the world by finding mentors, taking college classes only when they want to, starting businesses and learning collaboratively." In this passage, Stephens is suggesting that there are more opportunities for success outside of college by digging into your creative mind. In conclusion, Stephens' belief is that college is holding us back from success unattainable in the classroom.




In my view Dale Stephens has some legitimacy to his beliefs because students have to follow a given curriculum rather then creating their own, but in high school rather then in college. More specifically, I believe that the demanding standardized testing in high school is what ultimately kills creativity. In college, students can pick the paths they want to take along with a few general core classes that are required and needed, unlike in high school, where they are forced to take all the STEM subjects. For example students are prepped in high school for these tests while they should be able to explore different fields of their interest instead. Although Stephens might object that high school does not kill creativity, I maintain that it does. Therefor, I conclude, that kids are in fact losing creativity in our education system, but in the lower educational level rather then college. 

Dale Stephens is right about students lacking the creativity factor however; student's are lacking this because of the intense high school testing they are forced to go through. Going against his beliefs, college is actually giving students back their creativity they had lost. All throughout high school, students are drilled with STEM classes in preparation for these standardized tests. Students are pressured into this system to which many educators believe actually prepares students for college. Reality is, it does not. Taken right from the College Board's website, “A strong performance on standardized tests also helps students convince colleges that they are ready for the challenge.” These educators do not realize college is not all standardized education. College is a new experience, different cultures, multiple ways of learning, and finally a chance to explore creativity. If high schools gave students an opportunity to branch out into different arts programs, creativity would still be present.

Many other nations use standardized testing as a way similar to the U.S, to raise achievement levels. The difference is, in nations such as China they are successful and beneficial to the system. China’s education system has beliefs far different then that of Americans. The system is strict, demanding and very competitive. The standardized tests in school determine the outcome of the student. The United States has to realize we are not like the Chinese nation. In 2009, Shanghai ranked number one on PISA while the United States landed twenty third. Standarized testing works in countries like China, but in the U.S where everyone is given an opportunity at education, it simply is not cutting it.  



High schools and standardized testing administrators need to work together to adjust the tests to focus on the students on an individual level and promote their intelligence. The No Child Left Behind Act needs to be reconsidered. It is unfair for kids even in elementary school to have to live up to a standard. Each student has a different learning ability and specialization. Unless the students are picking the specialty of what they are being tested on, standardized testing even in elementary school should be abolished.  









Simply put, these standardized tests are overall biased. So many students success is not within the STEM subjects, but rather music or art. Why should those students who are intellectually advanced in those subjects feel like they are inclined for failure? When it comes to college, you can become an art major and are allowed to expand in that field of study. These standardized tests simply set these students up to fail, which then leads to them not getting into their choice school where they would pursue a degree not related to the STEM subjects they are forced to learn.

It is proven that art has an effect on the outcome of standardized tests. Many schools are cutting back on art programs which not only kill student’s creativity, but also lowers their testing scores. Schools are saving themselves money and resources, but are hurting the students. It is proven that SAT are higher with an increased level of art.




Some students are able to have the privilege to enroll in an art-based school in their district or join a program within their school. Educator do not realize how essential art is for students. More districts and public schools should give students this choice. 

"In several national studies over the past decade, students at risk of dropping out cite participation in the arts as their reason for staying in school. Research has also shown that arts education has had a measurable impact on at-risk youth in deterring delinquent behavior and truancy problems while also increasing overall academic performance.2 Despite these known benefits, as the findings of this report confirm, New York City public school students at schools with the lowest graduation rates have the least access to instruction in the arts." (Staying in School)

It does not help that high school teachers add to the problem of the loss of creativity in high school. Classrooms are ultimately becoming drill teams because of their demanding curriculums that allow for little leeway.


“In many districts, raising test scores has become the single most important indicator of school improvement. As a result, teachers and administrators feel enormous pressure to ensure that test scores go up. Schools narrow and change the curriculum to match the test. Teachers teach only what is covered on the test. Methods of teaching conform to the multiple-choice format of the tests. Teaching more and more resembles testing.” (How Standardized Testing Damages Education)

Dale Stephens talkes about "freeing yourself from the structures of the classroom and the authority of teachers." Who would not want to just go around this system of boring teachers and education? This seems like an appealing idea with how teachers teach, however, the classroom and teachers are essential learning tools. The classroom gives students a foundation and place to accomplish an education and the teacher reinforces. Without these two factors students would not be able to get as well of an education. When students are put in these drill team classrooms to prep for testing, students have to think abstractly and find creative ways to learn the material on their own. 

This is common in many high schools. Teachers and administrators are looking past the creativity factors for students and concentrating on their overall appeal of the school and are competing within themselves to be at the top with the highest scores. Teachers are just not making learning fun for students. Field trips have ultimately been eliminated and homework consists of hard multiple-choice questions and long reading assignments. Students are bored and it is hard to keep concentrated in this type of atmosphere.


"Policymakers should not assume that the biggest obstacle to preparing students for college is poor-quality teachers. Rather, the biggest problem may be the lack of alignment between the structure of high schools and what colleges expect." (High School Teaching for the Twenty-First Century: Preparing Students for College





College is where creativity is ultimately reestablished. Unlike high school, there are no more huge standardized tests that need to be prepared for or only one single way to explore education. Dale Stephens shows much controversy over the cost of college, but after high school, creativity needs to be established again.  Also, can we put a price on an education that is simply needed in today’s society?

Dale Stephans argues, “There are a little over 19 million college students in the United States, each of whom are graduating with an average of $24,000 in debt, according to the nonprofit Institute for College Access & Success. After college, they are forced to find a job to pay off that debt instead of being allowed to take the time to start companies, projects, causes or initiatives. They are, essentially, mortgaging their freedom in exchange for a degree.”

Stephans has a few valuable points in his argument, but today most jobs are seeking individuals who, in their eyes have a quality education, even if they really do not.  College is worth the debts that follow after. There is indeed too much concentration on college students and how much debt they will have to pay rather than the degree they will hold. Without a degree nowadays, it is almost guaranteed you will not hold a stable job.






It is proven that carrying a degree holds many benefits such as longer life-spans, greater economic stability and security, more prestigious employment and greater job satisfaction, less dependency on government assistance, greater participation in leisure and artistic activities, greater community service and leadership, more self-confidence. We see many adults going back to get a degree solely for these benefits. 

Stephans has such a high belief that we can succeed without a college education. I think that there are people out there who can do it, but I do not think that most people can without some college education. It takes someone extremely creative and advanced to be as successful as Steve Jobs or Bill Gates. To establish if college is necessary or not, it most definitely is. Dale Stephans states, “What many may find scarier still is that student loan debt is nearly impossible to erase in the case of bankruptcy. The bank can repossess your house.” Your degree is worth every penny spent. In our extremely degree saturated market, you need a degree in most cases to even be considerd for a job.

Overall our education system has many flaws as we have discovered above. The main flaw is clearly in the high school curriculum. In order to open up our creativeness even more, it needs to be expressed at the high school level and advanced in college. With all the talk about being able to succeed more out of high school directly, how can we with the little creativity we are allowed to express? I think that needs to be reviewed when considering going to college or not.

Wednesday, November 30, 2011

Argument Templates

Personally I thought the argument templates we were given were very useful. It made it easier to go off of and kept the paper organized. I liked how the templates forced us as writers to write in a persuasive way, which would need to be done for this topic. The template was easy to fill it out and make it your own, where people can argue that they are condensing. Even though you are using someone else's start, your building off of it as your own.

Monday, November 21, 2011

Going Against Our Education System

The general argument made by Dale J. Stephans in his work "The Case Against College," is that college is more of a burden in the long run, rather than a helpful necessity. More specifically, Stephans argues that students coming out of college are coming out with debt, less creativity and a desire to find a job quickly, not giving them the chance to explore in creative ways. He writes, "Instead of sitting in class, unschoolers create their education from the world by finding mentors, taking college classes only when they want to, starting businesses and learning collaboratively." In this passage, Stephans is suggesting that there are more opportunities for success outside of college by digging into your creative mind. In conclusion, Stephans's belief is that college is holding us back from success unattainable in the classroom.



In my view Dale Stephans has some legitimacy to his beliefs because students have to follow a given curriculum rather then creating their own, but in high school rather then in college. More specifically, I believe that standardized testing in high school is what ultimately kills creativity. In college, students can pick the paths they want to take along with a few general core classes that are required, unlike in high school, where they are forced to take all the STEM subjects. For example students are prepped in high school for these tests while they should be able to explore different fields of their interest instead. Although Stephans might object that high school does not kill creativity, I maintain that it does. Therefor, I conclude, that kids are in fact losing creativity in our education system, but in the lower educational level rather then college. 

My first concentration is the area where Dale Stevens lacks concentration on- high school testing killing creativity. Going against his beliefs, college is actually giving students back their creativity they had lost. All throughout high school, students are drilled with STEM classes in preparation for these standardized tests. Students are pressured into this system to which many educators believe actually prepares students for college. Taken right from the college board's website, “A strong performance on standardized tests also helps students convince colleges that they are ready for the challenge.” These educators do not realize college is not all standardized education. College is a new experience, different cultures, multiple ways of learning, and finally a chance to explore creativity. 

It does not help that high school teachers add to the problem of the loss of creativity in high school. Classrooms are ultimately becoming into drill teams because of their demanding curriculums that allow for little leeway.

“In many districts, raising test scores has become the single most important indicator of school improvement. As a result, teachers and administrators feel enormous pressure to ensure that test scores go up. Schools narrow and change the curriculum to match the test. Teachers teach only what is covered on the test. Methods of teaching conform to the multiple-choice format of the tests. Teaching more and more resembles testing.” (How Standardized Testing Damages Education)

This is common in many high schools. Teachers and administrators are looking past the creativity factors for students and concentrating on their overall appeal of the school and are competing within themselves to be at the top with the highest scores. Teachers are just not making learning fun for students. Field trips have ultimately been eliminated and homework consists of hard multiple-choice questions and long reading assignments. Students are bored and it is hard to keep concentrated in this type of atmosphere.

Simply put, these standardized tests are overall biased. So many students success is not within the STEM subjects, but rather music or art. Why should those students who are intellectually advanced in those subjects feel like they are inclined for failure? When it comes to college, you can become an art major and are allowed to expand in that field of study. These standardized tests simply set these students up to fail, which then leads to them not getting into their choice school where they would pursue a degree not related to the STEM subjects they are forced to learn.



High schools and standardized testing administrators need to work together to adjust the tests to focus on the students on an individual level and promote their intelligence. The United States is the only country to promote this type of testing. Other countries still exceed higher in scores and test more creativity.

“The U.S. is the only economically advanced nation to rely heavily on multiple-choice tests. Other nations use performance-based assessment where students are evaluated on the basis of real work such as essays, projects and activities. Ironically, because these nations do not focus on teaching to multiple-choice tests, they even score higher than U.S. students on those kinds of tests.” (How Standardized Testing Damages Education)

College is where creativity is ultimately reestablished. Unlike high school, there are no more huge standardized tests that need to be prepared for or only one single way to explore education. There is much controversy over the cost of college, but after high school, creativity needs to be established again.  Also, can we put a price on an education that is simply needed in today’s society?

Dale Stephans argues, “There are a little over 19 million college students in the United States, each of whom are graduating with an average of $24,000 in debt, according to the nonprofit Institute for College Access & Success. After college, they are forced to find a job to pay off that debt instead of being allowed to take the time to start companies, projects, causes or initiatives. They are, essentially, mortgaging their freedom in exchange for a degree.”

Stephans has a few valuable points in his argument, but our society is seeking individuals who, in their eyes have a quality education, even if they really do not.  College is worth the debts that follow after. There is indeed too much concentration on college students and how much debt they will have to pay rather than the degree they will hold. Without a degree nowadays, it is almost guaranteed you will not hold a successful job.



“Additionally, more than 86 percent of all jobs in the job market require at least a two-year degree. Earning a college degree gives you more choices and increases your earning potential.” This shows the importance of a college education.

Stephans has such a high belief that we can succeed without a college education. I think that there are people out there who can do it, but I do not think that most people can without some college education. It takes someone extremely creative and advanced to be as successful as Steve Jobs was. To establish if college is necessary or not, it most definitely is. Dale Stephans states, “What many may find scarier still is that student loan debt is nearly impossible to erase in the case of bankruptcy. The bank can repossess your house.” Your degree is worth every penny spent. In our extremely degree saturated market, you need a degree in most cases to even be considerd for a job.

Overall our education system has many flaws as we have discovered above. The main flaw is clearly in the high school curriculum. In order to open up our creativeness even more, it needs to be expressed at the high school level and advanced in college. With all the talk about being able to succeed more out of high school directly, how can we with the little creativity we are allowed to express? I think that needs to be reviewed when considering going to college or not.

Links for assignment 4

http://www.education.com/magazine/article/Standardized_Testing/


Critics say testing leads to a narrowing class curriculum, since teachers may “teach to the test” instead of exploring topics and approaches to teaching that may not produce results on paper.  


http://professionals.collegeboard.com/guidance/prepare
A strong performance on standardized tests also helps students convince colleges that they are ready for the challenge.


http://www.gifted.uconn.edu/nrcgt/moonbrja.html 


http://fairtest.org/facts/howharm.htm



Colleges often advertise themselves as creative domains—social and intellectual envi- ronments in which young adults can exercise vast freedom in exploring their emerging identities.10 Students learn and socialize in groups in which trust, norms, and group goals are forged through collaboration and adaptation.
http://www.vanderbilt.edu/curbcenter/files/Creativity-Narratives.pdf 






Wednesday, November 9, 2011

Template 2 (assignment #4):

The general argument made by Dale J. Stephans in his work "The Case Against College," is that college is more a burden in the long run, rather than a helpful necessity. More specifically, Stephans argues that students coming out of college are coming out with debt, less creativity and a desire to find a job quick. He writes, "Instead of sitting in class, unschoolers create their education from the world by finding mentors, taking college classes only when they want to, starting businesses and learning collaboratively." In this passage, Stephans is suggesting that there are more opportunities for success outside of college by digging into your creativity. In conclusion, Stepthans' belief is that college is holding us back from incredible successes.


In my view Dale Stephans has some legitimacy to his beliefs, because students do have to follow a given curriculum rather then creating their own. More specifically, I believe that standardized testing in high school is what ultimately kills creativity. In college students can pick the paths they want to take. For example,students are prepped in high school for these tests where instead they should be able to explore different fields. Although Stephans  might object that high school is actually what kills creativity, I maintain that it does. Therefor, I conclude, that kids are in fact losing creativity in our education system, but in the high school level rather then college. 



Monday, October 24, 2011

Assignment #3

Fairytale

Lesson taught: Never do something because of someone else. Go with your heart and dreams instead.

Main Characters:
   Melinda- adopted daughter of successful wealthy doctors, Meredith & Henry. She has a huge dream,           but her parents have other plans for her.

   Meredith & Henry- parents of Melinda. Controlling want her to live like them. (antagonists)

   Mary Jay- Melinda's birth mom who passed when she was born. Now works in magical ways for Melinda guiding her and helping her

    William- Melinda's love


 

Wednesday, October 19, 2011

Genres

For our upcoming paper, we have an assignment in which we have to write using a certain genre, instead of a narrative. I researched a few genres as follows:


fablea short tale to teach a moral lesson, often with animals or inanimate objects as characters
example: http://tomsdomain.com/aesop/aesopmain.htm
In this paper, I don't think a fable would be the best choice as It would be hard to use animals or inanimate objects to talk about education.


parablea short allegorical story designed to illustrate or teach sometruth, religious principle, or moral lesson.
example: http://www.eastoftheweb.com/short-stories/UBooks/LittRed.shtml
I think this is one of the better choices for me to chose in writing this paper.


fairytalean interesting but highly implausible story; often told as an excuse
example:http://www.bgfl.org/bgfl/custom/resources_ftp/client_ftp/ks1/english/story_telling/cinderella/cinderella4.htm


dialoguea literary work in the form of a conversation
example: http://www.monologuearchive.com/c/carroll_001.html
I also think this is a good genre to use. There are many ways It can be used.


graphic novella:
I am not artistically inclined to write using this genre.


(www.dictionary.com) 

Monday, October 17, 2011

"essentialism"

One of our english assignments this week was to read Essentialism and Experience by Bell Hooks. Overall I thought the article was hard to comprehend and I found it confusing.

Throughout the article, the concept of "essentialism" was used numerous times in Hooks arguments against Fuss. By reading and understanding the context in which Bell and Fuss used the word, I am able to form my own definition. To me essentialism means something similar to a guideline of living to a certain group. I don't think essentialism is something that is true rather then it's a stereotype given to certain ethnic groups such as "black feminists." People often think that one group or person is superior to another and they are given privileges.

argument:
"Black women are treated as though we are a box of chocolates presentedto individual white women for their eatingpleasure,so that they can decide for themselves,and others,which pieces are most tasty."

Wednesday, September 21, 2011

Close Readings

We recently received an assignment to blog about our opinion of a close reading. First off, a close reading, according to Dr. McClennens, is "developing a deep understanding and a precise interpretation of a literary passage that is based first and foremost on the words themselves. But a close reading does not stop there; rather, it embraces larger themes and ideas evoked and/or implied by the passage itself. It is essential that we distinguish between doing a close reading and writing one. Doing a close reading involves a thought process that moves from small details to larger issues. Writing a close reading begins with these larger issues and uses the relevant details as evidence." 

When it comes to close readings, I have a very indifferent opinion on it. I don't like having to pick out just one part of the writing, when there are usually more than one part that is confusing. I don't think when taking apart one sentence you're able to fully tell what the author is saying or wants the readers to think. But to contradict that, I like the idea of being able to view the passage in a more abstract way.

I think it's an interesting way of writing and without practice writing this way, i'll remain optimistic.  

Wednesday, September 14, 2011

Myself at 18 in 1943 ("Gillian Lynne")

In my English 101 class, we started writing a page each about different scenarios involving Gillian Lynne. Gillian Lynne was a girl, where nowadays we would say she has ADD or ADHD, but back in the early 1900's she was just thought to have some type of learning disorder. She was extremely fidgety and could never sit still, so her parents enrolled her in a dancing school. In todays century we would assume take the easy way out and shove a pill down children's throat to make them concentrate, rather than to listen to what they are trying to tell us. I am writing a narrative of myself living with some type of learning disorder, in 1943.
It's funny how today the day doesn't seem nearly as long and boring as it had last week. I don't feel as out of control and troublesome as usual. I feel like I can control my random outbursts and interruptions. I even volunteer to answer questions and read out loud. My teacher has approached me and told me what a joy I was in class to me, the total opposite of what she thought of me a week ago. Each class seems to be going by faster than the previous. I usually enjoy lunch and being able to talk freely with one another, but It's for once not the highlight of my day. Science and Social are a breeze to me, I even feel like I am understanding and getting the material being presented. Math doesn't seem to as dreadful as usual because I know once that bell goes off, I am free. I am free to do what feels as though is my future- to act. My parents told me I had to get involved with something, something to keep me busy that I would enjoy. I never thought about anything like that before. The theater feels like home to me. It gives me something to look forward to. It gives me a commitment other than school. I love it, I really do. My parents have never been happier to see me smiling and enjoying what I do. My attitudes towards school have completely changed. I know I need to concentrate and do well to keep my grades up to keep acting.  I love my parents for this. For the fact that they noticed this and done what was right. I couldn't have asked for a better outcome.

Monday, September 5, 2011

Twenty First Century, Emerson's view on "The American Scholar"

When looking at "The American Scholar" and the views Emerson has makes me question how much this would change in the twenty first century. Emerson states the idea that "Thinking is the function. Living is the functionary." I found this quote extremely interesting and It made me think of how we are living life in todays society. Knowledge is fed through the way you act upon it and the actions you take against it. I think today we are doing exactly so. There is so much knowledge in our world, were doors are constantly being open to new materials and ideas, that we take it and use it to our best advantages. We are building off one another's ideas and creating our own. We are an interdependent world in the way that we would not be self-sufficient without one another. 


"It is one central fire, which, flaming now out of the lips of Etna, lightens the capes of Sicily; and, now out of the throat of Vesuvius, illuminates the towers and vineyards of Naples. It is one light which beams out of a thousand stars. It is one soul which animates all men." Unlike my previous paragraph, his quote questions me as to if Emerson would be happy with the way we are in this century. Although our own knowledge and ideas are built off one another, how much do we interconnect with one another? Society today is divided into such obvious classes where everyone kind of does their own things. We need each other to a certain extent, but do much now on our own. I don't think Emerson would like the way that is. Rather than ".. one soul that animates all men," it is more so a tree with many branches, branching off to one man. 

Wednesday, August 31, 2011

"The American Scholar"

Through reading Emerson's "The American Scholar" I often found myself lost in his words and concepts. It was hard for me to follow the thoughts and writings he was delivering to his audience. I overall found the  fourth paragraph the most complex and difficult to understand. We know he is delivering a commencement, but he does so in an intricate, honest manner. As I look at the forth paragraph I wonder what Emerson is saying in the lines, "...in the beginning, divided Man into men, that he might be more helpful to himself; just as the hand was divided into fingers, the better to answer its end." I see it as stating that one will take more and gain more success from himself rather than from taking from others. I believe this is an overall difficult passage to read, but from it, I gained the insight that Emerson has a strong belief in self reliance when it comes to wisdom and knowledge. 

Tuesday, August 30, 2011

First Blog Post!

I would say, for not ever using a blog before, this was exceptionally easy to set up. I guess everyone is going to get to know me a little better now. Give me a few days and I will be more active in my postings!